Not far enough along to leave any serious feedback, but it's a good start. Please get it done as soon as possible after the break and inform me when it is finished. Happy to play it!
I'm a little kid who is starting a new year in a new city, having trouble make friends and ends up friending birds. The ending I got was the bird didn't bring a gift but pecked and goes onto the hair. There was no issue only a few punctuation mistakes but all is good. The color of the background and text gives this sky feeling. And birds are know to fly in the sky. So it works out very well, feel just a few more images and sounds of birds chipping would make it better. It's very cute that the bird would being gifts to the kid.
The game is about a young boy Liam who seems to have trouble making friends & prefers to watch birds instead. I enjoyed the motif of birds throughout the story, as I got an ending where Liam makes friends with some birds.
I understand that the game is still a work in progress, but having it in an outline format felt a little distracting to me personally. I'm excited to see where this game goes once finished, as I really enjoy the family interactions and dialogue, as what was provided so far feels really natural and cute!!
I'm a kid whose mom gives me snacks to make friends at school with, but I use them to feed the birds outside my window instead. I played again to see if there were other endings but it seems like there's just one for now. I like the color theme but it might be nice if the main text were thicker too. The story is really cute and I would love to befriend the birds outside my window.
I play as a 2nd grader Liam who makes friends with the birds outside his window by feeling them food. I got to the ending where the bird was pecking cookies off Liam's hand. Not really any issues, the only is that in the very beginning I thought it was a little unclear that I was playing as Liam. There wasn't any audiovisual but I think it would be good to add. I enjoyed giving the birds my food.
New Friends is a story about a young kid who has a hard time making friends. I got the ending where I befriend the birds and chill with one in my hair. While the game isn't finished it's a cute story with a lot of potential. Can't wait to see where this goes!
It was about a little boy who was going to school, and didn't want to make any friends, so instead he makes friends with birds. I got the ending where a bird comes and pecks at the cookie. Even though it's unfinished, I didn't really have any issues that stopped me from playing, although I was confused at the choice that was just AHHH lol
I played a kid who made friends with birds because he had a hard time making friends. I got to the end where the birds were pecking at the cookies on Liam's hand. The game's writing is really cute, and even though it's not finished yet, it's a cute game.
A story about a kid who has trouble making friends because he likes the birds better. I think there's only the one ending of the bird hopping on Liam's head right now so that's the one I got. Other than it being an outline, there were a handful of grammatical and spelling issues throughout this. I think this is a very endearing concept but as someone who knows a lot about birds, it did make me a little nervous when Liam offered cookies to the birds lol
I play as Liam, a young kid in grade school who has trouble making friends, so he makes friends with birds!!
Even though it's unfinished the game is SO cute so far!!! It's so wholesome and I love the concept, I can envision it really clearly in my mind. I would really like some audio or visuals to help enhance the experience but again it's unfinished so that's ok.
I love animal crackers so when they were mentioned that made me happy lol :) i would love to see this finished!!!
You play as a kid named Liam who makes friends with the birds outside his window. I think its a cute concept! I am not sure where the story is going to go or where any images or sounds fit in, maybe some bird noises when he talks to his bird friends?
I played as Liam a kid who has birds for friend. the ending I got was a bird landing on my head after i offered them cookies.The color choices are extremely calming.I think making it so the text I select doesn't appear in the upcoming paragraphs would make it a smoother read.
I'm following the story of Liam, a 2nd grade kid who isn't interested much in other kids at school but just likes watching birds outside the window. Considering this is WIP right now, whatever "ending" I got is just where your work ends, and things that hindered my gameplay like unfinished dialogue or choice branches will be fixed.
I do like the idea of following a kid who befriends birds, it's cute and simple but with enough flavor to keep you enticed.
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Not far enough along to leave any serious feedback, but it's a good start. Please get it done as soon as possible after the break and inform me when it is finished. Happy to play it!
I'm a little kid who is starting a new year in a new city, having trouble make friends and ends up friending birds. The ending I got was the bird didn't bring a gift but pecked and goes onto the hair. There was no issue only a few punctuation mistakes but all is good. The color of the background and text gives this sky feeling. And birds are know to fly in the sky. So it works out very well, feel just a few more images and sounds of birds chipping would make it better. It's very cute that the bird would being gifts to the kid.
The game is about a young boy Liam who seems to have trouble making friends & prefers to watch birds instead. I enjoyed the motif of birds throughout the story, as I got an ending where Liam makes friends with some birds.
I understand that the game is still a work in progress, but having it in an outline format felt a little distracting to me personally. I'm excited to see where this game goes once finished, as I really enjoy the family interactions and dialogue, as what was provided so far feels really natural and cute!!
I'm a kid whose mom gives me snacks to make friends at school with, but I use them to feed the birds outside my window instead. I played again to see if there were other endings but it seems like there's just one for now. I like the color theme but it might be nice if the main text were thicker too. The story is really cute and I would love to befriend the birds outside my window.
I play as a 2nd grader Liam who makes friends with the birds outside his window by feeling them food. I got to the ending where the bird was pecking cookies off Liam's hand. Not really any issues, the only is that in the very beginning I thought it was a little unclear that I was playing as Liam. There wasn't any audiovisual but I think it would be good to add. I enjoyed giving the birds my food.
New Friends is a story about a young kid who has a hard time making friends. I got the ending where I befriend the birds and chill with one in my hair. While the game isn't finished it's a cute story with a lot of potential. Can't wait to see where this goes!
It was about a little boy who was going to school, and didn't want to make any friends, so instead he makes friends with birds. I got the ending where a bird comes and pecks at the cookie. Even though it's unfinished, I didn't really have any issues that stopped me from playing, although I was confused at the choice that was just AHHH lol
I played a kid who made friends with birds because he had a hard time making friends. I got to the end where the birds were pecking at the cookies on Liam's hand. The game's writing is really cute, and even though it's not finished yet, it's a cute game.
A story about a kid who has trouble making friends because he likes the birds better. I think there's only the one ending of the bird hopping on Liam's head right now so that's the one I got. Other than it being an outline, there were a handful of grammatical and spelling issues throughout this. I think this is a very endearing concept but as someone who knows a lot about birds, it did make me a little nervous when Liam offered cookies to the birds lol
I play as Liam, a young kid in grade school who has trouble making friends, so he makes friends with birds!!
Even though it's unfinished the game is SO cute so far!!! It's so wholesome and I love the concept, I can envision it really clearly in my mind. I would really like some audio or visuals to help enhance the experience but again it's unfinished so that's ok.
I love animal crackers so when they were mentioned that made me happy lol :) i would love to see this finished!!!
You play as a kid named Liam who makes friends with the birds outside his window. I think its a cute concept! I am not sure where the story is going to go or where any images or sounds fit in, maybe some bird noises when he talks to his bird friends?
I played as Liam a kid who has birds for friend. the ending I got was a bird landing on my head after i offered them cookies.The color choices are extremely calming.I think making it so the text I select doesn't appear in the upcoming paragraphs would make it a smoother read.
I'm following the story of Liam, a 2nd grade kid who isn't interested much in other kids at school but just likes watching birds outside the window. Considering this is WIP right now, whatever "ending" I got is just where your work ends, and things that hindered my gameplay like unfinished dialogue or choice branches will be fixed.
I do like the idea of following a kid who befriends birds, it's cute and simple but with enough flavor to keep you enticed.